Post of Sim Character

Heres one post from my sim Characer Edward Cates of the USS Ottawa

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(USS Ottawa
Sickbay/ Science Lab
January 26 2385 20.10H
[i]flash back)
Edward was excited about his job. Never had he worked on a Star Fleet ship before. He couldn’t wait for the new adventure that going to take place threw the course of time. Walking into the science lab, he took a look around the place. Seeing the new technology made him feel tingly inside.
Another science officer walks up to Edward and said, “Welcome Ensign Cates. I’m Lt. Smith. Here are your tasks for the day.” Then the officer hands Edward couple of PADDs and continued, “Fallow me and I’ll show you to your station.”
Edward nodded his head and fallowed Lt. to his station. Reaching his station Lt. Smith stated, “If you have any questions please don’t hastate to ask.”
“Will do so, sir,” Edward replied.
“Welcome to the USS Ottawa,” stated then the Lt. went away. Edward typed on is censual of his station and going over a few reports on the Nebula. Going threw the already written reports, he made sure he read them twice.
As he was about to finish his report reading, the computers started to malfunction. Edward didn’t know what was going on. Moments arise and his counsel started to spark then exploded in front of him. Sending him several feet back, causing him to lose consensus.
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Now. Sickbay
Edward woke up with a splitting head ach. As his eyes slowly adjusted to the light, he’d wondered what just happened. Slowly letting out a moan and grown, a nurse came to his aid.
“Ensign Cates, your alright. Your in sickbay. There’s nothing for you to worry about,” stated the nurse.
Edward wasn’t having it. He sat up from the table, letting out shrieks of pain. “Sir, please lay down and the doctor will be here momentarily,” replied the nurse. Edward slowly laid back down on the table. After doing the nurse stormed away. Edward took this time and opportunity to look around sickbay. He saw he wasn’t the only person here. A lot of them looked like they were in worst conditions then what he was.
He thought to him self, “What a way to start your first day old chap.”
Soon the doctor came to him. She scanned his body. “Seems you just have a bumps and bruises.”
“Nothing from keeping me from work I presume.” he stated.
“No, but I will give you a sedative for the pain,” replied the doctor. With the hyper spray, the doctor injected it into his arm. Edward felt a little bit better. “If you have any other problems come to sickbay right way,” finished the doctor.
Edward slowly sat up from the table once more and replied, “No problem.” The doctor nodded her head and went to help a patient with 3rd degree burns. Seeing that sickbay was busy. Edward took the hit that it was ok for him to go back to work. He slowly got up and walked out of sickbay. He figured he should go see his superior to see what needs to be done.
“Computer locate Lt. Arjin Djinx,” he stated.
“Lt. Arjin Djinx is located on the bridge.”
Edward headed for a turbo lift. Once entering he stated, “Bridge.” And off he went. Once he reached the bridge he saw Lt. Djinx and walked toward him.
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